I like how you describe Don Quixote’s world has a fairytale and describe how he lives within his imagination. Good use of quotes and citations to prove the points you make in the essay. The description of neoclassical art has structured and following guidelines is very acute. The only thing I would say to work on is flushing out your thesis statement to better pertain to your topic.
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Good job using quotes from the passage!
I like how you describe Don Quixote’s world has a fairytale and describe how he lives within his imagination. Good use of quotes and citations to prove the points you make in the essay. The description of neoclassical art has structured and following guidelines is very acute. The only thing I would say to work on is flushing out your thesis statement to better pertain to your topic.
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